tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956072658295955015.post2201755269146413590..comments2023-10-19T10:35:16.272-04:00Comments on Peace Weaving, Peace Fasting, And Peace Poetry: Fast Day 245 February 11 2012 {That Shirt I Shall Call Grandmother}Montaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00017648070522030951noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956072658295955015.post-84472841919976068302012-02-15T11:07:03.833-05:002012-02-15T11:07:03.833-05:00...and "playing quoits" is Freudian......and "playing quoits" is Freudian...Montaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00017648070522030951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956072658295955015.post-23213343470871985352012-02-15T11:05:56.258-05:002012-02-15T11:05:56.258-05:00Thank you.
I spent a good deal of time wondering w...Thank you.<br />I spent a good deal of time wondering whether everything would be clear... contrary to popular belief, I do not like obscurity.<br /><br />Originally I put "girl...woman...love...grandmother" but I think "lover" in place of love makes it much clearer that we are talking of the stages in a person's life.Montaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00017648070522030951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956072658295955015.post-77146975488876146702012-02-15T11:05:08.044-05:002012-02-15T11:05:08.044-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Montaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00017648070522030951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956072658295955015.post-1181768549379816382012-02-15T05:56:41.018-05:002012-02-15T05:56:41.018-05:00This is quite beautiful. Even the simplicity of th...This is quite beautiful. Even the simplicity of the shape of the stanzas, the form of the he and she, are pleasing and right. And it captures what is really beautiful about love, and Valentine's Day, which is the longevity, the routine, the then, now, and future. Well done.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.com